I'm too tired to post anything incredibly relevant at the moment, or anything... but, I have some time to kill before I go and hit the sack, so what the fuck. Might as well throw another entry on this sucker.
Had to get up at eight this morning to go to Wade's "Writer Actor Lab", where basically a bunch of his actor friends read a port short of my choice and gave their criticism of it. I was pretty happy with the one I had them read, "Cubed"... until they read it. I got ripped apart pretty bad, and I realized how bad the script really was. I did the rewrite an hour or so ago, and I THINK I'm happy with it... even though it's probably not quite where it's supposed to be yet. Oh well, we'll see what happens tomorrow when it gets workshopped in class.
On that same note, 'Kerouac Days' needs a page one rewrite. After my most recent workshop, it was pointed out to me just how bad the script REALLY is. I'm not sure what I'm going to do yet, exactly... but, I'm going to have to make some really major changes. For example, I'm highly considering cutting Charlie out of the picture entirely, as well as bring in an altered version of Katie (...who's possibly going to be Dillon's girlfriend, rather than Gabe's.) I might throw a different version of Audrey in there to replace Katie... one who is slightly less bitchy, and has no relation to Kennedy. I don't know yet, we'll see what happens with it. The other MAJOR fucking change that I'm going to make without a shadow of a doubt is Dillon and Gabe's ownership of "Indies". They're just going to work there. I think that it's slightly more realistic, and it'll work better for both characters. My page rewrites aren't due for a little while, I think... So, we'll see what happens with it.
Still haven't cleaned my apartment up yet. I have Wednesday off, so, maybe I'll do it then. Who knows.
It's one o'clock, and I have school tomorrow morning, which means I'm off to bed.
Had to get up at eight this morning to go to Wade's "Writer Actor Lab", where basically a bunch of his actor friends read a port short of my choice and gave their criticism of it. I was pretty happy with the one I had them read, "Cubed"... until they read it. I got ripped apart pretty bad, and I realized how bad the script really was. I did the rewrite an hour or so ago, and I THINK I'm happy with it... even though it's probably not quite where it's supposed to be yet. Oh well, we'll see what happens tomorrow when it gets workshopped in class.
On that same note, 'Kerouac Days' needs a page one rewrite. After my most recent workshop, it was pointed out to me just how bad the script REALLY is. I'm not sure what I'm going to do yet, exactly... but, I'm going to have to make some really major changes. For example, I'm highly considering cutting Charlie out of the picture entirely, as well as bring in an altered version of Katie (...who's possibly going to be Dillon's girlfriend, rather than Gabe's.) I might throw a different version of Audrey in there to replace Katie... one who is slightly less bitchy, and has no relation to Kennedy. I don't know yet, we'll see what happens with it. The other MAJOR fucking change that I'm going to make without a shadow of a doubt is Dillon and Gabe's ownership of "Indies". They're just going to work there. I think that it's slightly more realistic, and it'll work better for both characters. My page rewrites aren't due for a little while, I think... So, we'll see what happens with it.
Still haven't cleaned my apartment up yet. I have Wednesday off, so, maybe I'll do it then. Who knows.
It's one o'clock, and I have school tomorrow morning, which means I'm off to bed.
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